The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
to inform you about the inconvenience our company's staff faces due to a lack of a cafe on our premises. I have heard complaints from several employees. Linking Words
Furthermore
, they say that not everyone can bring their lunch from home every day, Linking Words
therefore
, they need to buy it from the office's canteen. Linking Words
In addition
, due to cold weather, they Linking Words
also
would like to have hot beverages which can only be made in a cafe.
I believe there should be a facility like a canteen in our firm so that people can take a break from their work for a few minutes to keep their minds fresh. Linking Words
This
would Linking Words
also
help them in keeping a good focus on their job.
Here I would like to give a few suggestions about where to set up a seating area and a cafeteria for our people. We can build it at the back side of our admin block where the workers from all departments would have easy access to it. Linking Words
Moreover
, it has a large open space for putting tables and chairs.
I would appreciate it if you could look into Linking Words
this
matter at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite