People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What can be done to make people drink less?

Nowadays,

people

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are frequently willing to drink sweet

drinks

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. In the following paragraphs, I will explain some

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world wide

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phenomenon as well as mention a number of

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we can do to overcome

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false lifestyle.

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with, there are three main

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for the growing use of sugar-based

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.

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of all, we should not neglect the influence of the media. To explain, today, there are displayed several advertisements,

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targeting young generations to buy sweet

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especially

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soft

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of

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companies like Pepsi. For the

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reason,

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sweet

drinks

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are harmful to our body, we could not deny the delicious taste of sugar which

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us to consume.

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, the cost of these unhealthy

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is usually affordable to even

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class of dwellers.

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, a huge host of

people

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tend to consume sugar-based

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.

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, there are some offering solutions to deal with

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wrong habit.

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. If the advertisements of soft

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or even artificial juice become

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and replaced with some medical documentary programs on TV,

people

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presumeably

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will be less enthusiastic to purchase those detrimental

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. To illustrate, if a doctor

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citizens about the

illneses

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illnesses

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which high level of sugar can cause

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as high blood sugar or diabetes or even obesity, individuals will be understood the damaging impacts of these

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.

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,

celebtities

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celebrities

can affect

people

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younger ones and teenagers. If influencers through social media encourage viewers to consume

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milk or natural juice

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of

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artificial

ones in their daily meals, it would be better to have a healthy body. In

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,

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, we can

adress

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the challenge of excessive consumption of sweet

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. To conclude, advertisements, the fine favourable taste and easy access to

sagar-based

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drinks

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are the main motives of

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of

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drinks

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which can be resolved

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informing

people

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harmful

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effects by doctors and celebrities.