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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

#people #cities #face #life #government #move #towns
People
 living in large
cities
 have to face many problems in everyday
life
. What are those problems? Should the government encourage
people
 to move to regional towns? Many
people
 argue that
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life
 in
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megacities can contain
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 plethora of perils and issues which should be resolved by the government. I am in agreement with the
last
 statement, only If The government’s policy regarding
this
 subject does not contain any enforcement.
Firstly
, the immense human flow to the urban areas results in the overpopulation of the city which in the long-term decreases
life
expectency
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expectancy
 in the city. Nowadays,
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urbanization
are
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 the main tendency in many countries occurrences and ,
such
 as striking crime ratings, poverty,
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and speading
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speading
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spreading
spending
speeding
 diseases, are its concomitants.
For example
, New Dehli ,the city
contaning
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containing
 twice more amount
of
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citizens
than
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as
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 it should, with its enormously low
life
expectence
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expectancy
experience
 has been
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evidence of overpopulation’s dangers. Another traditional problem for
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urban areas is pollution caused by the traffic or the work of industrial companies. As
result
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 of carbon
emission
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,emission
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 air quality in the
cities
are
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comparesively
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comparatively
 low. In many
cases
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 air contains
evoparated
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evaporated
 toxics and
nitrats
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nitrates
nitrate
 which
undoubtly
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undoubtedly
 would damage one’s
healthy
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 if
person
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a person
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remainded
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remained
reminded
 in
this
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these
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 conditions
during
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long
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a long
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 period of time.
In
addition
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,addition
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 light and voice pollution are
also
 common for places with
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noticable
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noticeable
concantration
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concentration
concentrations
 of
people
. In my opinion, as
desire
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 to move
in
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 the big
cities
 recently has been a common wish among
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many rural residents, the adequate policy to
rise
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raise
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 awareness about the
disadvatages
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disadvantages
 of urban places and
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some steps toward improvement of
life
standarts
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standards
 in the
ural
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rural
 areas can facilitate the popularization of
country
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the country
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 lifestyle. To infer, despite many advantages and disadvantages
cities
 still remain
popularity
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 and some
countermeasere
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countermeasure
countermeasures
 by the government should be
takento
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taken to
 secure the stabile
frourishing
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flourishing
 of
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society.
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