The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over: What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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early and middle adulthood will reduce the capability of

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and employees will diminish

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traffics jam and climate pollution that lead to significant threatening

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of animals and people will be solved

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caused by infection and

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environments. In conclusion, It is evident that even if there are some benefits from reducing the population of

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in the future decades.

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must ensure steps are taken to prevent

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financial assistance for those who can not get married and afford parenting

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