Some believe that modern technology has made life of workers easier while others oppose. Discuss both these opinions and give your own idea.

Technological advances have profoundly changed people's daily habits and lifestyles over the past 20 years. Some parts of society claim that modern developments in technology have created an
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who work while
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side of
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these thoughts.
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of all, I strongly believe that technology has established a comfortable place for all of us,
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workers. To
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, we do not have to go so far from
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date, 25 years ago
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had to lift all of
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with their hands
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through
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to floors, but today,
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technological benefits they can easily lift
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staff that they have via
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elevator
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in terms of time and money.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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