It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person Or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people are born with specific talents in
sports
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, art and music and training can be one of the things that can improve
children
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without being talented. In any case, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be instructed to be a great
sports
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individual or artist. In
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in
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will be discussed. Nowadays,
children
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are being trained by schools and parents to be able to read and write.
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,
children
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can gain the
talent
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of reading by practising it.
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can be the same in
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and music. When a child has good skills, it does not mean he will be better than someone who does not have
talent
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. Our world is going toward a massive technology system in which
children
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(students) can find their
talent
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in schools. But
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,
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with
talent
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are more likely to learn the topics, talented
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need less time to understand the topics.
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, a successful
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player or musician is someone who has trained and
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natural
talent
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. Without natural
talent
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children
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can improve through hard work but
children
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cannot exploit and develop their own
talent
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. In summary,
children
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can be taught sport, art and music by practising and
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but to be able to improve their skills need to have the
talent
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to understand the topics faster than normal
children
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and natural
talent
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is required for some
children
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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