Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children's study. On the contrary, those online games have produced a lot of negative effects on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays,
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games
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are popular in our society, and most
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children
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plays
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type of game every day. But parents do not allow
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their children to play
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. It is because they believe that
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have no advantage to their children's education and
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this game
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is a waste of time. But truly,
computer
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games
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produce a lot of terrible effects
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youngers
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, like
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decline
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their mental and physical development. It
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