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job application cover letter is necessary or not for current world. Share your thoughts

#job #application #world #thoughts
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In our modern
days
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 most
companies
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 and firms would demand
job
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application
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 letters which means they want to know new
workers
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 in advance by
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the document
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.
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,
cover
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a cover
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letter
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 can help them throughout
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 process and figure out what kind of employers they need to hire. I believe that there are various reasons why
companies
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 should hire
workers
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by
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 their
application
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 letters. The main reason is, from that piece of paper
companies
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 will know what sort of
worker
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workers
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 they need.
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, if
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 need a worker with computer skills, they will never hire
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workers
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 with language skills. Another key benefit of
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job
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a job
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application
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letter
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 is
companies
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 check their
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workers
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 qualifications and abilities to know them better. A final point is that
this
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 source of knowledge is really helpful for the future of these
companies
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.
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 getting
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job
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 with
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application
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an application
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letter
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 is really demanded in our time because employers want to know about their employees more than
past
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in past
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 times. Even though employees have several degrees but
not
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 able to increase
the
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productivity in their working place they can
loose
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 their jobs. In conclusion, I believe that
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job
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a job
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 operation
letter
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 is really necessary for
current
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 world as it is the key
of
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 productivity and
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 for any other problems.
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