You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage should do to improve the food in future
My name is Mohammad
solati
and I am writing Correct your spelling
solution
this
letter as feedback for our firm. First
of all. I should say that our colleagues and other participants have been satisfied with your hotel especially
your employees.Add the comma(s)
,especially
Moreover
, they have treated us with kindness as well as politely with us and I appreciate about
Change preposition
apply
this
.
It goes without saying that they were unpleasant about some parts of your hospitality especially
about the meal. It had a terrible smell and some of our guests did not eat that meal at all. perhaps some ingredients of the Add the comma(s)
,especially
food
were not fresh.Furthermore
, our firm have ordered three kinds of food
yet on that night just two models of food
have prepared for us and it astonished us.
Eventually, we have an offer for your manager, If you are willing to others enjoy your food
please do not forget that purchasing fresh row
materials or changing your Correct your spelling
raw
chief
is a suitable way for helping your quality.
good luck
Mohammad SolatiCorrect your spelling
chef
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The Greeting
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- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
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- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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