You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage should do to improve the food in future

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My name is Mohammad

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and I am writing

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letter as feedback for our firm.

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of all. I should say that our colleagues and other participants have been satisfied with your hotel

especially

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your employees.

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, they have treated us with kindness as well as politely with us and I appreciate

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this

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. It goes without saying that they were unpleasant about some parts of your hospitality

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about the meal. It had a terrible smell and some of our guests did not eat that meal at all. perhaps some ingredients of the

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were not fresh.

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, our firm have ordered three kinds of

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yet on that night just two models of

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have prepared for us and it astonished us. Eventually, we have an offer for your manager, If you are willing to others enjoy your

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please do not forget that purchasing fresh

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materials or changing your

chief

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chef

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is a suitable way for helping your quality. good luck Mohammad Solati

mh.solati94Mon Dec 26 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

165 words

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The Greeting

Today many young people spend too much of thier free time at shopping malls.This can be considered negative for young people and society generally.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

You bought a phone recently, but you are dissatisfied about quality. Write a letter to manager.

Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

You recently learned that a close friend of yours has had a baby, and you purchased a gift for the baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Congratulate them on the arrival of the baby. Describe the gift you have chosen for the baby.