Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Today, all around the world we can see there are numerous singers, film stars, and sports stars with

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.

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, these occupations are paid according to their

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, but the majority of

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hold the view that these entertainers are paid highly. I completely disagree with the aforementioned statement and

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there are other jobs that should be paid highly. Commencing, even though some individuals feel that musicians, sports, and film stars are getting a big salary, it is because according to their

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and dedication to the work they do. It is evident today that a plethora of talented

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in these industries are multi-billionaires because they have earned the price from the scratch.

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,

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people

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should have enormous skills and

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to reach the stage they earn high pay. As an example, Sri Lankan cricket team members earn their pay according to the scores they get in every match, which means if they win two matches in a row they are billionaires.

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, these talented

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are getting paid according to their skills and performance in every show or song.

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, it is true that there are other occupations that should be highly paid and which are essential for the world.

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, in jobs

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as

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, janitors, and other skilled labourers, these

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are getting wages below their

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. As an example,

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are the lowest-paid job in Australia where they rarely get a pay increase even though educators put an enormous

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to teach children.

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,

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in Sri Lanka with the pay of a janitor are unable to spend their daily livelihood as well since the salary is not enough to feed three meals per day.

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, I believe that the above occupations should get the highest pay since the service they provide is required for the country. To conclude, I completely disagree that entertainers are getting paid too much, they earn an amount of money with their

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and skills which is not too much because of the

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they put into the jobs and

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teachers

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and janitors should be paid greatly.