On a recently holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Dear Sir The aim of
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you about
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lost motorbike vision 2020 model .
i
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bought it
on
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last
month and it has price is 40
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VND. Here is how it happened.
Last
week,
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travelled to Vung Tau city
by
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this
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motorbike and
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stoped
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at a restaurant beside the way to eat
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lunch. when
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had done and came back to go on my trip,
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did not see my motorbike there anymore. I tried to find it and asked everyone there but they did not know.
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even called the
pollice
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to help me but they only give me a document and
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have to record my situation. I wonder how
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could claim
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case and who could
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me to fill
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document
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. I hope you read my letter soon and give me
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way to resolve
this
case. Thanks and best regards My Huynh
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