Many organization and companies ask their staff to wear a uniform. What are the advantages of this?

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profoundly influenced all aspects of life over the 30 years. Developments
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technology and social conditions force
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employers
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to discipline their workers to wear suitable
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working hours.
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several advantages
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itself
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working hours could be defined as the
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advantage of wearing the
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flexible, employees might wear clothes that
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inconvenience
for working.
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drawback has a significant effect on bosses to keep their structure of
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conditions up.
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helps co-workers to understand that they
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from each other.
Thus
, they can easily cooperate with their
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.These all can be counted as the benefit of wearing the
uniform
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is that
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easier
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to determine who is working
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which
place
. To
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, when people go to
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they can understand who going to help them as a nurse or a doctor.
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of
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.
This
helps hospitals in terms of organization. Of
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this
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only valid for hospitals only
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for companies as well.
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then
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employers
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look at their staff they can recognize the difference between manager and crew. In
this
way, they will know which person they are going to interact with. In conclusion, there are several advantages of asking staff to wear a
uniform
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to determine the differences
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can be listed as the most obvious two.
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