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has been changing since the beginning of
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birth and every era or century has
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own trends. In course of time those trends
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new trends and eras changed, but there is a new trend and it looks like it is not going to be replaced with any other thing in the future, they call that
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online shopping. Nowadays
people
say that online shopping will demolish
shops
in
cities
and towns, I totally agree with that and
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paragraphs will explain in detail why
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power of online shopping won’t be beaten.
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and most important reason
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growing online shopping is money, when any goods price is compared between the physical store and online store it can be clearly stated that online
shops
are cheaper and pocket friendly. It can be explained
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two main factors,
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one
is rent and the other
one
is customer numbers.
stores will continue to pay rent to be able to
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sales and they will continue to serve
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number of customers,
on the other hand
online stores do not pay for rent and they’re reachable by anyone who lives on earth.
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number of customers and low business running costs let online shopping sales channels
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keep prices lower than physical stores and most
people
always choose the cheaper
one
, that rule never changes and applies to all.
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another reason why
shops
in towns and
cities
are swallowed by online shopping channels
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but
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a different perspective.
People
don’t have to get up from their couches anymore when they order something through
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and
it’s
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for online shoppers. If a party assumed
that is
going to buy any product from
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store, here are things that
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needs to do, driving is the
first
phase of it, and increasing gas prices and traffic jams in
cities
indirectly make any goods cost higher.
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phase is parking cost and
it’s
not an ignorable
one
.
s/he couldn’t find a chance to compare the prices or get benefited from any promotions which are
common in online shopping.
Previous paragraphs explained why online shopping can’t be beaten and the effects of it will be discussed here. Dead
cities
will be rising in the future
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the result of
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effect. When local
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to close in a town or city due to less income,
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will start to lose a big portion of
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income and when it happens they won’t make any investments
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the area and job
for
people
will drop and
people
will look for new
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to feed their families or itself.
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people
means
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for local
shops
and the effect of that chain constantly doubles itself.
As a conclusion, no
one
can stand in front of online shopping, no
one
is able to stop
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popularity and power anymore,
all counted effects of it will
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future and hopefully the result of it won’t be
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for any of us.