Fossil fuels (e.g. coals, oil and gas) are the main source of energy for most countries. However, alternative sources of energy (e.g. wind and solar) have been encouraged for use by some countries. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the current Era of industrialization, the role of non-conventional

sources

of

energy

is increased in some

country

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which I think is a positive development. In my essay, I would discuss the benefits of using

the

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alternative

sources

of

energy

worldwide.

To begin

, green

energy

sources

are eco-friendly and limited. Wind and solar

energy

are generated from sunshine and

air

which are everlasting and clean

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one

.

Additionally

, only

few

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countries in the world produce oil while all other countries have to buy from them which cost millions of dollars. By using wind and solar

energy

society can save money and fossil fuels for

next

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generation as well. Because

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there is limited crude of oil, petrol and diesel

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available on earth and

one

day it will finish for sure. Currently, there is a shortage of gas and petrol in our country, and the government is unable to provide the population with

such

sources

, so various conflicts are arising among the population. Perhaps,

such

problems would be solved if more

energy

was obtained from the sunshine and

air

in our country.

Secondly

, fossil fuel produces a lot of gas,

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releases

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of

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carbon dioxide which can cause the depletion of the ozone layer as well as

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global warming while other alternative

sources

of

energy

do not produce any of

such

things. Currently, we are facing climate change,

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pollution and needless to say burning fuels is

one

of the main reasons for

this

.

For example

, Tashkent is

one

of the cities with the highest

air

pollution because of that kind of green

energy

worldwide.

However

, we can save the earth

via

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shifting to new types of

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power. To conclude, research and investment in

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theme can show that alternative

source

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of power should be encouraged for

clean

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and healthy environment. With

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statements, I can restate my opinion that

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this

is a positive development.