IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

#time #job #part #course #tutor #situation #action
Dear Mr Jone, I am writing to
this
 letter
inform
Fix the infinitive
to inform
show examples
 you that I am unable to attend
Hospitality
Correct article usage
the Hospitality
show examples
 management course which
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 participate
in
Change preposition
in in
show examples
 the evening. The reason is that
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 I have to aboard another country for a couple of months due to
very
Correct article usage
a very
show examples
 agent matter.
This
 decision was taken by my employer and I could not change
Correct pronoun usage
it for
show examples
for
Change preposition
apply
show examples
that. Because I have to train staff which is
new
Add an article
a new
show examples
 open restaurant in recently.
Therefore
, I could not participate
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
 the class
through
Change preposition
apply
show examples
online
also
 because
need
Add an article
the need
show examples
 to do training staff
since
Change preposition
from
show examples
 morning to night.
However
, I will come back to Sri Lanka
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
 April and would like to attend you are class. It would be of great help if you can
approval
Replace the word
approve
show examples
, my suggestion. Because
this
 course
really
Add a missing verb
is really
show examples
 valuable for my carrier life. Yours sincerely, Devid.
Submitted by asankabiz84 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: