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global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given graph provides statistics about profit-making around the world of
such
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 companies as
Samsung
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,
Apple
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,
Nokia
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,
LG
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 and
ZTE
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 in 2009,2011 and 2013.The information is provided in billions of dollars. What stands out from the graph, is that
Samsung
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,
Apple
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 and
ZTE
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 followed a similar pattern.
To begin
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 with,in 2009 these three corporations stead off from their lowest points( 225-
Samsung
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, 20-
Apple
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, 50-
ZTE
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),
however
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, in two years' time their income rose : rapidly for
Samsung
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, tripled for
Apple
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 and slightly for
ZTE
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. In the two following
years
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 they showed the same tendency and reached a peak of 450 for
Samsung
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, 150 for
Apple
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 and 60 for
ZTE
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.
Nokia
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 and
LG
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,
on the contrary
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, have been showing a downward trend within these four years. They started with the highest sales of 440 for
Nokia
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 and 110 for
LG
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, which gradually dropped to 420 for
Nokia
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 and 90 for
LG
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. Though, 2013
Nokia
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 lost almost half of its initial profit,whereas
LG
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 reached the point of 80. Overall,
Samsung
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 ,
Apple
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 and
ZTE
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 have increased their profit,whilst two other concerns' sales have been decreasing constantly within the period of question.
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