You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter in context to some of the challenges I am facing with my current roommate.

Firstly

Linking Words

, I am working as a waitress for a part-time job and I arrive late most of the time,

hence

Linking Words

, I have to keep the lights on to freshen up and prepare for my bed.

However

Linking Words

, I believe

this

Linking Words

is bothering my roommate as her sleep gets disturbed. Sometimes, I prefer studying late but I cannot do so because of my roommate.

Secondly

Linking Words

, I like to keep things very tidy and organized but my flatmate is the opposite of me. She doesn't clean the bathroom properly which is annoying for me. I would really appreciate it if you could assign me to a private room where I can study peacefully and come home at any time without hesitation. Please let me know the possible solutions at your earliest convenience. Thank you for giving attention and time to

this

Linking Words

matter and I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ria

riyabulia12Sat Dec 31 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event
I am Jacob, a member of the Richard Global Pupil Club, Brisbane with registration number 201536. I am writing to show my willingness to include my protein mango cake dish into the upcoming event based on popular foods of numerous nations.
6.5
band
Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population . To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the human population has increased over the years in the ways through which we take up the land that was once called house of the wild animals. It is thought that people should spend a large amount of budget and human resources on taking care of wild animals, while the opposing point of view would be using money to serve human life. The latter view is reasonable, which means that I disagree with the former one.
8
band
Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: •why you think the rent shouldn't be increased •what you will do if it is increased
I received the memo in my email yesterday morning about the proposed plan to increase my house rent. In my honest opinion, I don't think this is the best time for such an increment. Moreover, this apartment I am staying doesn't worth the set price in my view.
6.5
band
Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Several people affirm that presently individuals rely more on each other while others believe in the opposite. Due to this writer’s experience, it is more advisable to become independent owing to the significant effects this trait has on self-development despite those who assume that the contrast aids people’s soft skills.
8
band
Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that cities offer the best living conditions, while others believe that rural areas provide a superior lifestyle. In my opinion, although urban areas present various advantages such as access to jobs, services, and modern amenities, the peaceful and less stressful environment of rural areas makes them more desirable for many people seeking a slower pace of life.

Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: •why you think the rent shouldn't be increased •what you will do if it is increased

Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Discuss both views and give your opinion.