In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that female leaders could build a more harmonious global community since a vast number of male leaders in
history
have made numerous decisions to raise wars and conflicts. I totally disagree with
this
view mainly because the decision to start a
war
is quite often a collective decision of a nation and
thus
individual leaders should not take the blame. First of all,
history
has proven that conflicts and violence are often a product of long-term inequality and hatred in which the society as a whole collectively votes to start a
war
.
For instance
, when the German military followed the instruction of Hitler to engage in invading neighbouring countries in World
War
II, the entire population had been struggling with economic difficulties for more than a decade before the initial call for
war
. Considering
this
as a collective decision of every German to fight for economic prosperity and wealth in a brutal way, I do not think Hitler or any other individual should be fully responsible for raising international conflicts.
Instead
, the fundamental cause of
war
is deeply rooted in various social factors that lead to desperate, aggressive behaviours of a group.
Moreover
, there is little evidence that gender has a significant impact on the leadership style of a person. In fact, recent research has revealed that some other factors
such
as personality, educational background and family
history
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greatly to a leader's approach to conflict management. We have seen numerous queens in
history
,
for example
, the
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Queen, who had incredible military talent and was inclined to utilize military power to obtain wealth from foreign nations, was quite aggressive despite being a female.
Therefore
, I believe we should look at a range of factors thoroughly when we attempt to determine whether a candidate for a national leadership role is belligerent or not. In conclusion,
while
we tend to relate a President’s aggressiveness to his or her gender
accordingly
, there is no obvious proof to illustrate whether being a male can lead to a more belligerent approach to tackling cross-border conflict.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • male-dominated leadership
  • empathetic
  • cooperative
  • inclusive society
  • governance
  • diversity
  • sustainable peace
  • social welfare
  • collaborative approach
  • international relations
  • leadership qualities
  • decision-making processes
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