Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays
internet
usage has become predominant everywhere. Unlike other services,
Government
should try to provide
internet
free of cost to everyone in the country like paving roads. I do not agree that
Government
should take
the
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responsibilty
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responsibility
for
this
, as It can be disregarded that the necessity of
internet
availability is similar to other services.
Firstly
, in many countries the Governments are providing free wifi in most
of
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the
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public places which
includes
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the airport
an airport
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airport
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airports
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, railway stations,
government
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and government
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hospitals etc.,
In addition
to
this
, though it is widely used around the world , everyone's perspective of usage is not the same. Not everyone uses the wifi at the same time , speed and purpose. It varies from person to person.
Unike
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Unlike
the usage of other amenities like roads provided by
Government
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, which after getting fixed can be used as and when necessary at no extra cost after the pavement is completed
for
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once. Whilst
internet
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would be more expensive to spend for the whole country as a whole.
Secondly
, the availability of free
internet
at all times will leave many individuals and children spoilt. Adults might be found surfing social media applications and children might be spoilt playing games and accessing other unwanted websites which would result in an unhealthy society in the future. Families may split up due to poor communication between each
and
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other, less concentration on education by kids , lack of care for the elderly etc., which will end up in a cultural mishap. To conclude, I disagree that it
not
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compulsory to give free
internet
to people in the country whilst there are many other important services that are being rendered by the
Government
for the public. Henceforth , it is better to leave
internet
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in the list of bills to be paid by the individual which would keep them regulated.
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