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With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solution to it.

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It is not
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 that, nowadays amount of divorces
are
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 increasing universally year by year.One possible solution to
this
 problem is to impose heavy taxes on divorces and use
this
 money for
children
 who do not have parents, that to say they live in
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an orphanage
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orphanage
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This
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this
 problem and
suggest
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 some possible solutions to it. One of the
first
cause
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 is that in recent years many young
people
 and their parents do not take into consideration
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young
man's
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 and
girl's
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girls'
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 ages to marry.Because they do not have information about family, they cannot take care
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 their new families.
Furthermore
, they do not know real life. Another cause
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this
 problem is that
,
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 today's
children
 not as patient as the
people
 in the past. Impatience principally causes
to
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divorce.
For example
, we often see some
people
 have
disagrement
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disagreements
 and
then
 they go to
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court
As a result
, their
children
 have to live without their mothers or fathers.
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Nevertheless
, there are solutions.
First
 and foremost, the heavy taxes would discourage
people
 from divorcing because it would be very expensive. At present taxes are already high for a lot of
people
In addition
, if
children
 learn about family and how can
people
 provide their family with money,
then
 they would ready to marry. Teaching about real life would be
necessary
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 way to
children
 and their future. To conclude, divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing universally and families today are not as close as they used to be.
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