You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. you phoned the shop but no taken was taken.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter with regards to
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had bought equipment kitchen from your shop but it had some problem as bellow. My name is My Huynh and
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would describe the item as follows. It is
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inductions hob model 2022 with
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number
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BPL518065. I bought
online
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and it
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deliveried
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delivered
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home and when
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opened
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seen
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it
broken
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surface glass on
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the conner
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conner
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of it.
Then
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called to shop and
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talked with Annie. She was
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sell consultant who told me
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the damage
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damage
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product to
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and
promised
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change another for me
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one or two
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more. But today is three
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from
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that day,nobody contact me again and
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do not receive
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one too. In view of
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this
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i
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would like to request that you should consider
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situation and could answer me as soon as possible
throught
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through
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Email or my phone number’s 032659895. Thanks and best regards My Huynh
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