Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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, teaching and learning
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to another country. In
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we discuss both views.
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learning
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languages is very helpful for any citizens who
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in a country with
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attractions.
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some country that
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developments
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cultural activity
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their
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about another culture.
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one
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thinks the development
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very useful for existing better communication between them. In conclusion, in my opinion in
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modern
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we need to learn
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for raising our communication between humankind.
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English
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language
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strong efficiency that you could
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who
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around the world.
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definitely believe for
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number of
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and attractions too, some citizen would
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be learned
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