You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am one of your
viewes
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viewers
views
of
TV9 channels. I am writing Change preposition
on
this
letter for you to tell you the
issue Change preposition
about the
from
the wrestling Change preposition
with
programs
that be on air at 8am every Wednesday.
Firstly
, the programs
actually are interesting for an adult but I think that unsuitable for children
under 18. Moreover
, these programs
have contained a lot of violence that can lead children
to copy the action from the programs
. As you know children
always
been interested in copying from what they see. Add a missing verb
have always
For instance
, after my children
watched the program, he already tries the skills with his sister and this
only will make them worst if they continually see the programs
.
However
, the programs
should not be banned to air. I would like to suggest you for
change the time of Change preposition
apply
programme
to after 9pm Add an article
the programme
instead
. This
will over
all Correct your spelling
cover
children
's bedtimes. In addition
, you should put signs of underage restriction
as people will be more aware of the contents of the Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
programs
.
Thank you in advance, please give this
matter your immediate response.
Your
sincerely,
LyndaCorrect the word
Yours
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