You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of your
viewes
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viewers
views
of
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on
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TV9 channels. I am writing
this
letter for you to tell you
the
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about the
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issue
from
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with
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the wrestling
programs
that be on air at 8am every Wednesday.
Firstly
, the
programs
actually are interesting for an adult but I think that unsuitable for
children
under 18.
Moreover
, these
programs
have contained a lot of violence that can lead
children
to copy the action from the
programs
. As you know
children
always
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have always
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been interested in copying from what they see.
For instance
, after my
children
watched the program, he already tries the skills with his sister and
this
only will make them worst if they continually see the
programs
.
However
, the
programs
should not be banned to air. I would like to suggest you
for
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apply
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change the time of
programme
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the programme
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to after 9pm
instead
.
This
will
over
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cover
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all
children
's bedtimes.
In addition
, you should put signs of underage
restriction
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restrictions
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as people will be more aware of the contents of the
programs
. Thank you in advance, please give
this
matter your immediate response.
Your
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sincerely, Lynda
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