You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of your
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TV9 channels. I am writing
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letter for you to tell you
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issue
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the wrestling
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that be on air at 8am every Wednesday.
Firstly
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, the
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actually are interesting for an adult but I think that unsuitable for
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under 18.
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, these
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have contained a lot of violence that can lead
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to copy the action from the
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. As you know
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always
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been interested in copying from what they see.
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, after my
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watched the program, he already tries the skills with his sister and
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only will make them worst if they continually see the
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, the
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should not be banned to air. I would like to suggest you
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change the time of
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to after 9pm
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.
This
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all
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's bedtimes.
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, you should put signs of underage
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as people will be more aware of the contents of the
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. Thank you in advance, please give
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matter your immediate response.
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sincerely, Lynda
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