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Nowadays, many people have to work longer hours, and they feel more stressed out than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their employees' lives easier?

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 undeniable fact that an increasing number of individuals are facing excessive stress in modern society compared with that fifty years ago.
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, it has become a heated controversy.
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 my respective, the boss and social
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. There are two main reasons why a majority of workers believed that they are living with anxiety emotion.
First
, they constantly need to work for
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time
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half of a whole day.
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 citizens with
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full-
time
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 in information technology companies are given a number of difficult tasks.
For example
, according to the latest survey from Singapore Newspapers, most
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employees
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 complain that the hours of work overtime are increasing. So, it is not uncommon that bosses play a major role in the problem of
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.
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social
media
 fails to say that it is innocent,
as a result
 of money-worshipping value is pervasive via the spreading of digital
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work to spend much extra
time
 to get a high salary.
Although
 stressed employees have become a popular social issue, there are two ways that can be used to handle it.
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 of all, it is
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 way for
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 to provide travel opportunities as a one
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no-cash compensation paid that
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 workers to unwind
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 tasks.
In addition
, it is another practical one that
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 a break
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 and morning. For
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, powerful evidence from a Britain local report, approximately 80%
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 are satisfied
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 tea break and the chance of tours;
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 availability. In conclusion, not only should employers have
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, but
also
 social
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However
, it is not a hopeless issue, because building
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 employee
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 system may be a possible solution,
such
 as the opportunity of becoming
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 and sobering yourself by taking break
time
.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
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  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Burnout: A state of physical and emotional exhaustion often caused by prolonged stress.
  • Telecommuting: Working from a location outside of the traditional office environment, usually from home.
  • Work-life balance: The equilibrium between personal life and career work.
  • Flexible working hours: A system that allows employees to choose their working hours within certain limits.
  • Occupational wellbeing: The overall mental, physical, and emotional health of an individual in relation to their job.
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