"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's

modren

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modern

world,

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new disease

are emerge

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rapidly. It is considered by,

society

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that a major chunk of money from

a nations budget

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a nation's budget

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should

be allow

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to promote

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precaution awareness rather than

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treatment. I totally agree with

this

statement and give the reasons for my saying.

To begin

with, if we educate the citizens about

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health

problems it would be easy to control them. To explain it,

population

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the population

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can use

the

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effective methods to

stops

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the

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contagious

health

issues and save many

lifes

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lives

life

.

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, the recent global

health

problem,

corona virus

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coronavirus

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was controlled by

encourage

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the public to take effective measures.

Hence

, it is proven that rather than curing

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individuals

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individual's

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diseases it is more

benefical

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beneficial

to spread the proper steps to prevent

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them

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.

In addition

, the prevention will result

is

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in

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less patient

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fewer patients

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in

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the hospital

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hospital

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hospitals

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and require

less

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fewer

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workforce. To elaborate, appropriate steps followed by the community keep them safe and have other numerous benefits.

For instance

, in a recent study, it is proven that the folks that use hygiene and

precaution

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mesasures

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measures

and

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adviced

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advised

advice

by professionals pay

less visit

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fewer visits

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to

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the clinic

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clinic

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clinics

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.

As a result

,

low

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a low

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number of

sick

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the sick

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patient

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patients

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require less

medience

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audience

improve the

health

of citizens. In conclusion, not only the prevention keep the population healthy but

also

contribute to the economy of the nation.