You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter - Explain what happened to your watch - Describe your watch - Ask the manager to help you find it

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Dear Sir, Myself Anushree, your client for the day of 23rd December 2022 at your hotel. I am writing

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letter in regard to my smart wristwatch which I left while I was leaving the hotel. In detail, my device is digital

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on that day it was run out battery of it so I put it at the charging point in the

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corner of the room;

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I forgot to bring it with me. My digital watch is Boat brand which has model number 12w.

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, it has a blue dial screen with a red belt.

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to that, it has a square shape screen display. The buds

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have a case to put them safely. I would appreciate it if you could parcel it to my home address which I attached herewith for your kind reference. If you have any dought

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please feel free to call on 12344567. I am waiting for your prompt action in order to get my watch as soon as possible. Thank you, Yours faithfully, Anushree.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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9 paragraphs

184 words

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