Formal letter. In your school, one of your friends has been feeling down and demotivated. You take it as your responsibility to cheer him/her up and do this via a Birthday party invitation. Write to your classmates and talk about organizing the party. Please include • the reason behind the party • the location of the party • discuss any other arrangements You should write between 150-200 words.

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Dear harsh, It’s been

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hasn’t it? I am assuming you know

condition

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of Saraha’s. She is feeling very desolate, due to her

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report card and because of

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she is planning to go back home overseas. I have the perfect fix for her condition. I am exhilarated with the idea

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popped up in my head, which will not only help Saraha but

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, we can loosen up. How about hosting a party at

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club

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downtown? Not only

this

spot will help us to relax but

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place will help us with

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. How’s

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idea

sounds

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? If you are in, can you please go ahead and collaborate with our other friends, if they would like to join us

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Keep in mind we must arrange

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event

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as per

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and must decorate

club

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environment. If you have any alternate ideas for

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, please get back to me. I will stick to my phone waiting for your response. Best regards, Neer shah

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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