It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour for children?

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parents and upbringing.

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may lose their

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the child to not

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fear.

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,the severe form of punishment may cause the vast majority of psychological harm to

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lifestyle.

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of severe child abuse. One solution

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issue is to teach children with the help of their tutor or the people who have

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kind of problems,it is a good

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viewing how they act in

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their mistake. In conclusion,

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vital for children to behave

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with negative emotions which will cause

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huge trouble

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should give better decisions and good habits to make challenges easy.