In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success

As we are living in a democratic and capitalistic

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, we have the

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to achieve our dreams unless it does not violate the law.

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, some

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argue that our right should be acceptable only if when it contributes to social justice. In

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essay, I will explore both opinions and elucidate my arguments in the following paragraphs.

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of all, when we have the

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to accomplish our visions and our

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will lead to financial security,

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have more motivation to work hard and it eventually increases the sum of

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of our

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. As one of the eminent ,philosophers Jeremy Bentham pointed out, maximizing

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eventually results in the whole justice.

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,

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in North Korea do not have motivation or encouragement, as they are living in a communist nation which means even though they work hard it does not enhance their life qualities.

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, the reason why South Korea has developed so fast

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several decades is that

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have a strong ambition to succeed or achieve their life goals and

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provides all the necessary provisions.

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, there is nothing better than individual

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when we want to inspire one's desires to achieve.

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, no matter how much individual

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has extended, if social justice is not realized, our

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has no meaning. In some ways, our

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is a zero-sum game which deprives limited resources of others.

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,

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is not coming from someone's exclusive ability, rather than it comes from the structural contradiction in

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.

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is why we have to think not just about surviving ourselves only but about coexisting altogether.

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, some Northern European countries

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as Denmark and Finland are very egalitarian societies as there are not many absolutely rich or poor

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. In these equal societies, the poor do not have to worry about their abject poverty,

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the rich

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do not show off their wealth.

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, social balance creates and promotes

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for everyone. To sum up, it is indisputable that human

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is crucial as

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is the main source of

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's encouragement.

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, if we pursue too many individual rights it

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destroys our social values and eventually

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leads to unhappiness. We have to work with the government to increase our total sum of

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.