Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary times, some subjects like
technology
and science
are sometimes considered more significant than learning history
in teaching at schools. While some individuals believe that history
is one of the most important subjects in school. In my personal viewpoint, although
history
has a crucial place in social studies, technology
and science
are more useful.
On one hand, history
presents a wide range of vital knowledges
to be aware of the past. Learning about the past causes awareness about the present and future. Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
For example
, if youths get familiar with priceless concepts such
as freedom and liberty that are gained through hard attempts they will be more sensitive to preserving them in the present time
. It is a good saying that the nations who do not learn from their past will force to repeat it. So having knowledge about history
leads children to make a better future.
On the other hand
, some individuals believe that in modern times, it is more beneficial for young students to spend time
on being capable of using technology
and more qualified in science
subjects. They truly argue that if children do not know anything about past times, they would not lose anything in the present time
. Although
, having a glance at history
have positive effects on students’ viewpoints it does not play a vital role in their future career. I find this
argument convincing since in our modern life, it seems we are more dependent on scientific qualifications rather than public knowledge. Students will have enough time
to read history
when they grow up. Adolescents should spend more time
learning practical skills to be successful.
In conclusion, although
, there are some priceless concepts in learning history
, from my viewpoint it is a more logical belief that students should spend more time
obtaining more beneficial skills such
as science
and technology
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