You lost an item while travelling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee. In youro letter, - Describe what you lost and how the employee helped you find it - Say how you felt after recovering it - Explain why it was important to you

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am thankful to one of your workers who helped me. I am your regular passenger who uses your bus service. Let me explain the situation, yesterday I did forget the important

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the bus, which I realized after some time but the bus was gone. I submitted the application in your office about my missing

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your employee patiently

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my issue. He did an investigation and called me back when he found my

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. I was so happy when I heard that he got my

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. Before ,that I was depressed and worried because it was an important document. The

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are related to my work project which I will show to my boss. I spent huge time on

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project for getting a promotion from a company.

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, my career depends on

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project. I am glad

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I got it

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, I am thankful for your employee who helped me to find it. I really appreciated his work. Yours sincerely, Abc

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

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179 words

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