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It is a good thing if senior management workers in a company get a much high salery than other workers in tha same company. Do you agree or disagree?

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is not stranger to see that the senior management corps usually receive the highest
payment
 than the youngest one, and the answer to the question "is it
right
?" cannot be an easy yes or not. Of ,course a person which works in the same company for a long
time
 has got more knologemengt than news
workers
 so in
this
 case is
right
 that the
first
 receives more money than the others. Probably has more
work
 to do and
also
 more responsibility to respond. In spite
of
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, is important to specify that in many cases the situation is completely different: the senior
workers
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worker's
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 abuse
of
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other
workers
, even if maybe the seconds spend more hours at
work
 with
a
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 lowest
payment
. I completely disagree with
this
 type of
behavior
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. Indeed, in my opinion, is important to guarantee
a
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right
 career and
payment
 for all types of
workers
, because is correct that everyone has the same possibility of lifestyle and personal/
work
 career.
For instance
, if a fresh graduate starts to
work
 in a company, of
course
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 his salary will be lower
that
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 colleagues because they have more experience or certification or responsibility. At the same
time
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 his salary must be decent, in respect of his person, his studies and his
time
. in ,
addition
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 the employer must guarantee
to
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him a good possibility of
career
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 by selecting one senior worker that will teach him all the most important skills and secrets to complete well his task. At the same ,
time
 the candidate has to show
a
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real concentration, interest and commitment to what he does.
Therefore
, my idea of an ideal
work
 salary is based on good cooperation between the most expert worker and the new one to provide a good future for the company. Both positions must be retribution in
a
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right
 way
,
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 and recognize results,
time
, studies, certification and skills that each singular worker owns and puts into his job. In ,
a
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conclusion I agree only if ,actually the senior management
workers
 deserve
this
 highest
payment
 because of their irreplaceable contribution.
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