The main purpose of a university is to provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed for students to get a good job. To what extent do you agree?

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Madhu Rana through his work experience with our organization, she
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joined the department in the Month of Feb 2017, as a consultant Landscape Architect
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New Delhi which is the Head office of
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Jal Board in India. Listed below are his key roles and responsibilities: • Site Supervision or Coordination • Conceptual Design • Design Development (DD) • Working Drawings
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Madhu Rana has shown the kind of initiative, which is necessary to be successful over the
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in our Organization. She has excellent skills, yet remains focused on the overall needs of the client. She is a conscientious worker and has an excellent work ethic. I recommend Madhu Rana, on account of her
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to the assigned job and responsibility. If you have any
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9650291619 or e-mail me at [email protected]
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stepping stone
  • preparatory grounds
  • theoretical knowledge
  • practical skills
  • industries
  • holistic development
  • intellectual growth
  • personal growth
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • adaptability
  • research and innovation
  • advancing knowledge
  • societal benefits
  • employment prospects
  • professional networks
  • internships
  • alumni connections
  • collaborations
  • employability gaps
  • underemployment
  • changing nature of work
  • vocational training
  • online courses
  • self-learning platforms
  • targeted job-specific skills
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