These days, people prefer to throw damaged items away, while in the past, they used to repair and use things for a long time. Why do you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change?

In
this
21st century, technology is growing in
a
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fast phase.
People
are using advanced technology which makes their life easier.
However
,
on
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the name of
advancement
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they
also
making
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those gadgets and artificial materials which are destroying
nature
. These
things
cannot be biodegradable
and
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or
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recycle
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. Before
people
were not only saving money but
also
respecting
their
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mother
nature
. The
first
thing is
people
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people's
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mindsets they follow trends and fashion nowadays without realizing how much waste they are causing example, clothes and other household accessories and when they could not find those attractive or good enough
then
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they
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throwing out. They think if they will
use
the same thing again it will affect their image among friends and society. Individuals just buy
things
use
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used
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one
time and throw those out.
Moreover
, industries do
production
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a production
the production
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of
things
which once made cannot be destroyed, reuse
and
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recycle
for
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instance, polyethene is
selling
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sold
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in shops, convivence stores etcetera which
people
are
also
buying to carry their stuff like groceries
instead
of eco-friendly bags just to pay little less money. Governments
also
not taking any action regarding these serious issues. In fact,
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the authority
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authority
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authorities
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should totally put
ban
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a ban
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over
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apply
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those
things
which are not suitable for
environment
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the environment
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and can
be
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use
only
one
time.
This
kind of material
affecting
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affects
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nature
very badly. In ancient times,
people
try to preserve and take care of everything they have but nowadays it Is totally
opposite
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the opposite
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.
People
try to
use
what they have already and
use
one
thing for different reasons. As mentioned above,
polyethene like
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material
people
throw
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throws
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anywhere
which
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animals and birds can eat and get sick
also
. If they throw these
things
out after
one
time
use
, it
also
increases garbage which is not eco-friendly at all and
destroying
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destroys
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nature
and natural resources. In conclusion, there are many factors to include. It is
a
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duty of every individual
by
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not
following
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stupid trendy rules and government should
also
ban
on
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the production of material
that is
impossible to destroy and recycle. So,
environment
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the environment
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should be neat clean and eco-friendly by
recycle
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recycling
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and
reuse
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reusing
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things
.
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