These days, people prefer to throw damaged items away, while in the past, they used to repair and use things for a long time. Why do you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change?

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are using advanced technology which makes their life easier.

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throwing out. They think if they will

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time and throw those out.

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try to preserve and take care of everything they have but nowadays it Is totally

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duty of every individual

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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

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