Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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. I do not agree with the statement because I believe

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are more emotional than

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more rationally than

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are more emotional than

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. It is to be said that

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are emotionally drained or attached

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anything or

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. Their emotion comes

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whenever they do anything or want to express their thoughts. Being an emotional person is not bad at all.

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, because of their

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nature, they have to hear that they are

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, they always get rejection in terms of taking the lead.

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, it is still a rare case in our country that a lady becomes or

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as a CEO of a company. Another possible reason that will justify disagreement is,

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can take any

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more rationally than

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point is somehow connected with

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first

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one. If a person

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easily emotional,

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is obvious s/he won’t be able to take any

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rationally. They will think emotionally

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logically.

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another reason behind the failure of

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. People discourage

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to take part in any kind of

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decision making

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process.

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still

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21st

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century, a girl, a

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women

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or a lady needs permission before doing anything.

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is a failure of a nation. In conclusion,

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need more time to rise above all. They need to work on their emotion and logical reasoning before they take part in leading anything.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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