Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?

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education. Because they believe study in
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, they should learn
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english
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communications.
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why we should learn
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become a global
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manufacturing
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other nations and some nations import essential
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other
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countries
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nowadays
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industries
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developing
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internationally because of globalization.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalized education
  • Access to education
  • High-quality institutions
  • Career opportunities
  • Proficiency
  • Prerequisite
  • Cultural immersion
  • Language skills
  • Global network
  • Technological advancements
  • Scientific research
  • Academic resources
  • Comprehensive
  • Personal development
  • Independence
  • Immersion
  • Employment prospects
  • Academic exposure
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