Recent figure of youngster's crime rate has increased in many cities of the world. Give reasons and solutions to this problem.

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There is an ongoing discussion regarding the crime rate around the globe.There are many reasons behind
this
.
First
of all, I would like to describe what is lawlessness.Anything which is morally wrong is called a breach.
Although
, it has many types and every type is harmful.Do good have good.Actually,if you blame anyone without any reason it's a breach. Now, I would like to give an explanation as, to why the evil rate increasing dramatically.
Firstly
, due to lack of education.Citizens have forgotten their culture, history, and morality.
Secondly
,youngsters don't have employment.which is the basic reason because they don't have any source of income. In order to fulfil their needs mostly they hit
this
option.
Thirdly
, in broken families' kids often hold
this
opportunity.
In addition
,when people are unable to get their rights in order to mitigate their complex they frequently move towards
this
option.
Last
but not least,poverty galvanises the citizens to hit
this
foolish opportunity.When I cast my mind back,I remember, the theft rate increased in my country after the flood.
On the other hand
,they were the problems.But I will give some solutions to overcome
this
issue.
First
of all, the government should invest money in education systems,where everyone can get an education free of cost.
Furthermore
, there should be some stipends for pupils.
Additionally
, the authorities should provide jobs to their taxpayers.
Moreover
,it's the
first
and foremost duty of parents to set their eyes on their children.
Last
, in conclusion,from my standpoint, either you are poor or you are ignored by your administration you don't need to hit
this
option.Just work hard and it will pay back and success will lick your feet.
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