People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays,
people
more often use credit
cards
than other different methods of payment. Credit
cards
has
more advantages than Change the verb form
have
disadvantages
since people
can keep their money
on credit
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the credit
a credit
card
. In
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This
this
essay will examine advantages
and Correct article usage
the advantages
disadvantages
of using credit
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a credit
card
to make monthly purchases.
On the one hand, the two main advantages of using Fix the agreement mistake
cards
credit
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a credit
card
are usability and safe storage of Fix the agreement mistake
cards
money
. Firstly
, using charge
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a charge
card
is comfortable for people
. Therefore
, they do not need a certain physical
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a certain physical bank
certain physical banks
banks
to keeping
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keep
money
. Moreover
, it is more convenient to pay online
purchases or Change preposition
for online
buying
something in real life. Wrong verb form
buy
For instance
, we have a
plenty of several Remove the article
apply
credit
cards
from different international banks
. Secondly
, it is more safely
to keep Replace the word
safe
money
in
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on
credit
cards
since a multitude of banks
has a
strong digital security against hackers. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, banks
hire specialists on
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in
cyber-security
of the bank. Correct article usage
the cyber-security
Furthermore
, thieves are easier to steal money
from purses than with credit
card
.
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cards
On the other hand
, credit
cards
also
has
some major Change the verb form
have
disadvantages
like credit
card
hacking and inability
to open a Correct article usage
the inability
credit
card
for children. At the moment, we have a lot of crime in digital
world. Add an article
the digital
a digital
Hence
, it also
related Add a missing verb
is also
with
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to
credit
cards
. For example
, hackers trying to steal money
from people
's credit
cards
. In addition
, children can not use credit
cards
, subsequently
, we need to give them money
in hand. For example
, banks
do not issue credit
card
until the age of 16.
In conclusion, if we still have some Fix the agreement mistake
cards
disadvantages
of using credit
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a credit
card
to make monthly purchases, the benefits well outweigh them. BecauseFix the agreement mistake
cards
,
it is comfortable for Remove the comma
apply
people
and more safely storage
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store
money
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