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Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing.

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The pie chart depicts the various destinations of
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graduates
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 from one university, and the table shows their earnings after five years of work in three different sectors. Overall, working full-time is the most popular option among
graduates
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, with 52% taking on full-time positions. In terms of pay, while 80% of freelance consultants and government employees earned at least $75,000, only slightly more than half of those working for private companies did. The majority of the
graduates
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 had full-time jobs, according to the pie chart. Comparatively, the percentages of part-time workers and jobless people were far lower, coming in at only 15% and 12%, respectively. The figures for
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 of
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 who choose to pursue full-time postgraduate study and the unknown group,
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, are both 8%. The final 5% of
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 students chose to work part-time while going to graduate school. To sum it up
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, According to the table, individuals with
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 majors who worked for the government or as independent consultants earned more than those who worked for private businesses, with 80% earning at least $75,000. In comparison, only 55% of private businesses earn at least $75,000 per year.
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, the government sector and freelance consultants each accounted for 5% of workers in the lowest pay bracket ($25000-49999), whereas corporate entities accounted for twice as many, at 10%.
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