Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

There is no doubt
sports
play a crucial role in
society
. increasing
sports
facilities
will be motivated the
people
of any country .
however
, while some believe that these
facilities
would not enough for
people
's
health
and
also
it needs more
activity
for them. I would agree with those who argue that improving one facility should not be the best way for civilians.
Firstly
it is vital that
sports
keep our
society
fit and healthy. if
people
, who want to keep their bodies healthy, play
Sports
regularly, they will become fit.
in addition
,
people
want better comfort when they practice
sports
activities. If they will get more
facilities
, they will be more interested in going
practicing
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physical
activity
.
on the other hand
, if civilian
society
does not feel the homely environment in the playground, they will leave on
practicing
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sports
.
as a result
, the ideal rate of Public
Health
will falling off in the future.
However
, I believe that there is a lot of
activity
which is emergency for all classes of
people
to refitment. not only improving
sports
facilities
but
also
other resources should be improved.
significant
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part of the
people
in our
society
are above on 50th, they are not capable to take any playground
activity
because of their
aging
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problem. Authorities should be reminded if they would take any decision about
Society
.
for example
, arranging a Marathon or cycle running competition will increase
people
's inspiration about their
health
. by arranging public
health
campaigns and insurance proficiency, civil
people
will get more benefits than
sports
facilities
. In conclusion,
Sports
facilities
are needed in our
society
for improving
people
's
health
but
this
is not the major object which has not any alternative to gearing up public
health
. There have several events available in our
society
which will improve
health
issues more faster and significantly rather than
sports
activities so that all generations of
people
should take part.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • sports facilities
  • physical activity
  • exercise
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • obesity
  • inclusivity
  • participation
  • safe environment
  • social interaction
  • community engagement
  • comprehensive approach
  • health education programs
  • environmental factors
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • quality healthcare services
  • public health initiatives
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