Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

sports
activities
as much as important as educational
activities
and most
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illness cause prevent by
sports
, I am of the opinion , should allocate the same amount of money to
sports
and libraries and I
agree
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firstly
, a healthy mind needs a healthy body
therefore
universities should encourage students to exercise, absolutely
this
works effectively to improve my study ,
for example
when
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was at the academy for my bachelor, I was a member of the university's sambo
team
and did exercise
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was in good mood and was an effect of learning
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, the university can have a better
team
and help the national
team
in the future. many studies have shown that most the national
sports
team
originated from university sport
team
to conclude, the basis of my view is based on two reasons that written above
sports
activities
as much as important as educational
activities
moreover
policy of universities are different
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