Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, such as sky diving and rock climbing.Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era , there are so many
sports
which are enjoyed by
masses
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. Few folks believe that authorities should
ban
risky
sports
,whereas others are against
this
notion . I totally agree with
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view and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs .
To begin
, with the reasons that why individuals think the
ban
of dangerous
sports
must be because sometimes
masses
are unguided about the rides which they want to enjoy when they tostart enjoy or riding it
then
they have dangerous to lose their own life due the without information of the sport .
Furthermore
, sometimes when people take a risk of doing something
that is
a dangerous sport , they fail to make a proper balance in the particular game and get big injuries
such
as broken bones and other more.
For example
, in the year , 2010 a survey was conducted by UNO which was indicating about 60%
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fall to recover from their injuries part due to heavy injury .
On the other hand
, people believe stopping anybody's passion is not their responsibility because if the
masses
stop their children
then
how they take
risk
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in their life as well as how will they get more successful in a particular sport
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per their opinion every
sports
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sport
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have a negative image in the public and each game have an advantage as well as disadvantages .
Moreover
, if government
ban
such
kinds of
the
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dangerous game
then
a person does not enjoy their life those are keen on dangerous
sports
.
For instance
, in the year , 2014
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news was trending about the
ban
on dangerous
sports
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65 % were against
this
news . In conclusion , if each one has proper knowledge about risky games
then
people must wear proper clothes related to
sports
and they must spread knowledge to others.
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