Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many
people
believe that
people
learn a foreign
language
just
in
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purpose
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of travelling and working while others argue that these are not the only cause.
This
essay will explore why I agree with the latter view on the basis of learning a foreign
language
. Admittedly, most of the time
people
learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
to get a job or to travel
in
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other countries. If anyone wants to establish himself in any country except his homeland, he should know the
language
of
this
country. Without knowing
local
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language
, it is hardly possible to manage a job.
Besides
workers, many
people
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fond of travelling. If any
person
go
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to explore new places
in
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abroad, there should be experienced in
regional
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the regional
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language
,
otherwise
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they would not be able to communicate with zonal
people
, feel
social
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culture, know details about them, and many other important things.
Additionally
, without expertise in
native
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town tongue, it would be very difficult for tourists to spend time in unknown places.
However
, there
is
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other functions why
people
eagerly wanted to acquire non-native tongues. To illustrate, when a
person
wants to
study
in
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overseas, they will most likely require a new
language
.
For example
, if any
person
from
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a desire
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desire
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to continue their
study
in Europe or America, they must
requisite
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to master
in
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their languages. On top of that, in our academic syllabus, we have to
study
international
language
English. It is mandatory from primary to at least college.
Along side
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mother tongue, Muslims from all over the world usually learn
Arabic
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the Arabic
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language
for religious
aim
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. As
Muslims
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central religious textbook
always
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in
Arabic
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language
in
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around the globe,
people
who
wants
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to read it and understand
they
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must be expert in Arabic. In conclusion, while many
people
can proficient in
different
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a different
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language
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languages
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with the aim of travelling or working, others
also
can give afford for learning because of their
study
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studies
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or religious reason, which can be equally significant depending on the
person
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situations
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.
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