Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?
There are
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a group
group
of individuals Fix the agreement mistake
groups
complain
that they have hardships in getting ample Correct pronoun usage
who complain
of
sleep. The lack of sleep is due to the deluge issues that they are encountering daily; innumerable Change preposition
apply
of
ways can solve Change preposition
apply
this
.
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being
surrounded by them. Starting with money issues which is the major conundrum of Wrong verb form
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of the individuals would think Correct article usage
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where
and how to solve Change preposition
about where
this
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, in the Philippines which is a Linking Words
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country, both city and rural dwellers are unable to sleep out Add a hyphen
third-world
of
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how
to have a fund to purchase essential commodities. To solve Change preposition
about how
this
issue, they must know the Linking Words
basic
of saving money, Fix the agreement mistake
basics
hence
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this
would give them something to utilize in return in times of calamities and emergencies.
The advent of technology has a great impact as well in obtaining Linking Words
an ample sleep
. Abusing Remove the article
ample sleep
a night of ample sleep
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of phones and laptops Correct article usage
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considered
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is considered
as
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a
great Correct the article-noun agreement
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disturbances
and Fix the agreement mistake
disturbance
interruptions
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interruption
in
sleeping. Change preposition
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For instance
, people from different walks of life may Linking Words
suffered
from lack of sleep because Change the verb form
suffer
instead
of sleeping on time, they tend to unawarely play games and browse the internet while Linking Words
on
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in
bed
. The best Add an article
the bed
way
to solve Use synonyms
this
problem is to practice self-discipline Linking Words
for
an adult. Change preposition
as
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, parents must have the proper tutelage of phone usage for the youngsters Linking Words
especially
during bedtime.
In every household, behaviour problem is a bone of contention Add the comma(s)
,especially
which
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in
a day since my older sister always Change preposition
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an unacceptable Wrong verb form
showed
way
of talking towards my brother. Use synonyms
This
is the main culprit of my mother's lack of sleep. Their attention was called for them to live in a separate house to deter fighting, Linking Words
consequently
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good manner and right conduct is a Correct article usage
apply
way
toward a harmonious relationship that Use synonyms
aide
my mother to have Correct your spelling
aids
a quality sleep
.
To conclude, financial instability and abusing Remove the article
quality sleep
a night of quality sleep
usage
of technology may disturb and interrupt sleep. Correct article usage
the usage
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money, self-disciplining and proper guidance of parents to their children would be the best Change preposition
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way
to obtain Use synonyms
a
quality time of sleep.Correct article usage
apply
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