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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

#people #difficulties #lack
There are
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group
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groups
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 of individuals
complain
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who complain
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 that they have hardships in getting ample
of
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sleep. The lack of sleep is due to the deluge issues that they are encountering daily; innumerable
of
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ways can solve
this
. The human brain is immensely preoccupied
of
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 many things that
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being
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 surrounded by them. Starting with money issues which is the major conundrum of
the
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society.
Majority
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 of the individuals would think
where
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about where
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 and how to solve
this
 financial problem.
For instance
, in the Philippines which is a
third world
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 country, both city and rural dwellers are unable to sleep out
of
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thinking
how
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about how
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 to have a fund to purchase essential commodities. To solve
this
 issue, they must know the
basic
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basics
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 of saving money,
hence
,
this
 would give them something to utilize in return in times of calamities and emergencies. The advent of technology has a great impact as well in obtaining
an ample sleep
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ample sleep
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. Abusing
use
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 of phones and laptops
considered
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as
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a
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great
disturbances
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disturbance
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 and
interruptions
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interruption
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in
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to
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 sleeping.
For instance
, people from different walks of life may
suffered
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suffer
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 from lack of sleep because
instead
 of sleeping on time, they tend to unawarely play games and browse the internet while
on
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in
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bed
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the bed
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. The best
way
 to solve
this
 problem is to practice self-discipline
for
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 an adult.
In addition
, parents must have the proper tutelage of phone usage for the youngsters
especially
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 during bedtime. In every household, behaviour problem is a bone of contention
which
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I considered our family is suffering in similar. My mother could not obtain a good sleep even 4 hours
in
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a day since my older sister always
showing
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 an unacceptable
way
 of talking towards my brother.
This
 is the main culprit of my mother's lack of sleep. Their attention was called for them to live in a separate house to deter fighting,
consequently
,
a
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good manner and right conduct is a
way
 toward a harmonious relationship that
aide
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 my mother to have
a quality sleep
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quality sleep
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. To conclude, financial instability and abusing
usage
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the usage
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 of technology may disturb and interrupt sleep.
Through saving
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 money, self-disciplining and proper guidance of parents to their children would be the best
way
 to obtain
a
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quality time of sleep.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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