tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other. to what ecxtend do you agree with this idea ?

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the best option for communicating and realizing various ideas even

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different nations .I partially agree with

this

attitude , I will express adequate examples to support it .

First

and foremost , as it is clear by

traveling

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, passengers can face

with

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various traditions , so they can compromise with each other , so not only is it perfect for learning new thing but

also

cause respecting

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other

view point

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and conventional

behaviors

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,

for example

, by visiting religious cities adventures would be learnt to wear hijab

,

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and communicating with religious people .

Moreover

, it is undeniable fact that individuals will

be

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learnt to be malleable by tourism industries, due to , it let

let

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them

to

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touch with numerous nations with different convictions.

Secondly

, I am of the belief that

globetrotter

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would be dealt

by

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lion’s

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share majority of troubles or attitudes , if they travel more , they will learn more

solution

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to react to diverse or even awkward cultures , the prime example would be , in special cities

such

as Dehli, Panjab and Bambaee citizens prey cow by travelling to there as a tourist they learn to understand Indians custom .

Overally

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,

globe trotting

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has been selected as a crucial issue for

comprehensing

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comprehensive

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other , even though they are not like-minded with you. In conclusion, I completely agree that the tourism business has had the benefit

to

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the realization of unknown

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and

teach

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people to be flexible in tough

cirmstances

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circumstances

or confront

with

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strange

behaviors

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.