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Some people think that students should learn a range of practical skills at school (such as car maintenance or managing money) alongside traditional subjects like maths and physics. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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when we are students, we should learn not only traditional subjects
such
 as maths and physics but
also
 have to learn some practical
skills
. by looking
this
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 point of view we have to agree that both traditional
subject
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subjects
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 and practical
skills
 are important.
student
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Students
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 learn almost
everyday
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 in
school
 to prepare
their
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 future. by studying
through
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every
subjects
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 in
school
, they can
try
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 imagine what their want to be in the future and all
this
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 traditional
subject
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subjects
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 will help them to achieve their dreams.
although
, there
are
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 some knowledge that
actually
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 really important for human basic
skills
but
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we can't get it in
school
 practical
skills
 are some knowledge that we can't get in
school
eventhough
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even though
 it's important.
for example
,
school
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schools
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 don't teach how to change a flat tire. it is actually important
especially
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 in
emergency
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an emergency
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situation
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situations
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. we can save
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apply
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our
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time by doing it by
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ourselves
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ourself
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ourselves
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 rather than
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waiting
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wait
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waiting
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 for someone to change it for us.
other
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 example is managing money. if we
dont
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don't
 learn how to manage money well, it can be a disaster especially when we retired and we have no more income. since a
teenager
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 we have to know how to
seperate
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separate
 all money we have for different types of
need
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needs
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. by not putting aside that traditional subjects are important, we have to
aware
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 that practical
skills
 are
also
 important. not only
school
 are
responsibled
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responsible
 to teach
student
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students
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 practical
skills
 but
also
 people around the student should teach them,
such
 as
parent
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parents
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 or others.
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