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Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company or an institution. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, everyone used to say that
self
 employement is better than a job in a
company
 or an
institution
. Because in current times people wnat to
self employed
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self-employed
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their
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there
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 don't want to work other
companies
 or
institution
.
Since working
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Working
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 in
companies
 can make you
stressful
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stressed
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 and annoyed for no reason. You have to be polite with
boss
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your boss
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 and colleagues since it's not your own property.
For
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From
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 my perspective, if you are working in
company
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a company
the company
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 or any
institution
 you have to be very careful with your daily routine like getting up early in
morning
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the morning
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 and
be
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being
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in
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on
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 time.
In other
words
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,words
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 if you'
r
self
 employed like you have
you'
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your
r
 own
business
 you don't have to be that careful. If
you'
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you're
your
you'd
r
 working in
institution
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the institution
an institution
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 you have to be very careful with you are teaching methods. If you are
self employed
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self-employed
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 you can hire other employees with your own opinion.
Working
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The working
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 method is very hard in
companies
 and
institution
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institutions
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 not in
business
.
For
instance
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,instance
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 if your
self
 employed in
business
 you can give
better
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a better
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 life to your family and
loving
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loved
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 ones. In
companies
 and
institution
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institutions
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 you have to follow you are sir orders like time. In
business
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,business
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 you can have
you'
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your
r
 own time in anything.
For
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In
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 my view
business
 should be better if want to
secure
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be secure
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 in life. In conclusion
company
 and
institution
 routine change by
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the head
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head
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heads
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 of departments
sometimess
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sometimes
 not in
business
. In modern times
every one
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everyone
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 wants to do
you'
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your
r
 own
business
 not
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
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work in
company
Correct article usage
a company
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and
Correct word choice
or
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institution
.
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