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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people‘s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#shops #food #drinks #people‘s #health
Nowadays a great number of people consume junk food which is harmful to
health
. It is considered to be that these kinds of meals and beverages should be restricted
for
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 sale. I totally agree with
this
 idea and will support my point of view with the examples below.
First
 of all, the limitation of unhealthy
foodstuff
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 will facilitate the improvement of people’s
health
 in general.
For instance
, according to
the
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recent studies conducted by
University
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the University
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 of Michigan, it has been proven that consuming products with no additives and substitutes reduces the blood sugar level and normalizes blood pressure.
Consequently
,
this
 prevents the risk of developing serious diseases,
such
 as diabetes, cancer or obesity.
Furthermore
, public awareness and self-conscience would rise significantly if there were some measures against selling food and drinks not conforming to quality standards. Folk will give preference to plain and nutritious meals, which might enhance productivity and prolong life expectancy. Prohibition of
such
 a detrimental beverage as alcohol will decrease
the
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crime and accident rates as well. In conclusion, products with scientific proof to be bad for
health
 should be prohibited since
that
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 might have
dire
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a dire
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 impact on people and provoke serious
health
 problems.
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