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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However, some sat that young people can also take the lead of organizations or companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, in Most
teams
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 high levels
such
 as leaders or directors frequently have a higher
age
.
Nevertheless
, many argue that the company
also
 can be led by younger
people
 too.I totally agree with
this
 statement that younger
people
 are able to be a leader due to several reasons.
Firstly
, most companies when they hire
people
 for high-level positions should be chosen and recognize the
people
 by their background experiences
instead
 of a number of
age
. Some young
people
 may have past various kinds of jobs than someone who is elder.
For example
, the director of some companies may do
work
 for only 7-8 years as beforehand they didn't do any
work
, whereas , compared with the younger
people
, they may
work
 more than those elderly
people
.
Therefore
work
 experience is more valuable than
age
.
Moreover
, the younger population tend to have
various
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of
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ideas
 and catch up with the trends faster than elder
people
 who have worked a long time.Obviously,
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teenager is familiar to use social media and technology more.
For instance
, most of the teenager's works will show fresh
ideas
 than the elder
people
 who always do a pattern they have done before. To conclude, I absolutely agree that younger
people
also
 can be a leader and directors at any
age
 as they may have more experience and
also
 have more fresh
ideas
 and catch up with trends quicker, While elder
people
 may lack experiences or new
ideas
 compared with younger
age
people
.
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