Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer group pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It should be mentioned that in today's modern
life
, it is observed that young people
are easily trusted by the people
around them. This
type of thinking is now widespread among young people
. In my opinion, this
can lead to competition among the youth and the harms of this
can be demoralizing and doing
more harm than good to our youth.
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do
Firstly
,when young people
try to compete with their peers
, they develop a sense of progress. Although
peer pressure harms most young people
, it encourages them to move ahead in life
. For example
, students in the same class are always in competition with their peers
. This
creates healthy competition in education. In the classroom, young people
learn a lot from their peers
. Therefore
, we should allow young people
to spend time with the same mature friends.
Secondly
,being influenced by other children is causing many children to become depressed. Overexposure to children covers up their own shortcomings and affects them negatively. As a result
, the young person becomes disillusioned with himself and is encouraged to do negative things. Everyone and every person is different. For example
, young people
are now using brent phones. Young people
are asking their parents to get them, these phones are expensive and they can't afford them. That's why young people
have to be influenced by their peers
.
In conclusion, everything has advantages and disadvantages. But in modern life
, young people
should be supervised by adults, because they can do things that will bring them into a negative situation when they enter the big life
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...